Worldshipyard Dock 4

I must speak from the heart, I really love your work and dedication, I find alot of similarities in the way that we approach things, although I don't think it shows if you compared our gallerys, you have a unique style, and I wouldn't change that, but there is something that makes me like and dislike your work at the same time. I want to see this colored in a style that suits the linework, but you need to get a better sense of light source and compositional value structure. Without them, even the shading your added, the picture still looks flat. Here is my suggestion to you and I think its a good one because when it was suggested to me it helped me. Construct a composition in value, don't just shade the areas that are supposedly in shadow, fill an area with a large block of value go over everything in a certain area in one value, the farthest elements, all one value, midground, similar value save the clouds, and the foreground egg shaped things, another. It will help organize the depth in a way that makes it easier for the eye to percieve.

I only suggest these things because I think you have alot of potential.